#5lines collection for May challenge

There is beauty in modesty;
Its modest to surrender;
there is modesty in beauty
Its beautiful to surrender;
Surrender modestly Oh beautiful !



Written for May Challenge by Ava [Day 15] , May2011 Int’l 5 lines poetry Month , Sunday Scribbling

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Proud , submissive
moulding breaking forming
It changes as it charges ahead;



Written for May Challenge by Ava [Day 16] , May2011 Int’l 5 lines poetry Month

Author: Pratibha

Poet , Story teller , dreamer and an avid reader. Self published authoer of "Fragments" http://www.amazon.com/Fragments-ebook/dp/B00ASNQUC6/

17 thoughts on “#5lines collection for May challenge”

  1. Nimue—you will be hearing from me. I thought you did not like romantic scenes. This is a beautiful description of a lover admitting their love for the other.


    PS: Wait till you get mu e mail—hmmm!

  2. Two excellent poems; but I have to say that I would have preferred to see ‘surges ahead’ rather than ‘charges ahead’. Charge is a harsh word, whereas surge sits well with the final ‘fluid’.

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