Sweet poison

sugar coated words;
medicinal yet lethal
if taken too much
medicinal turns lethal;
even sugar words

Written for May Challenge by Ava [Day 9] , May2011 Int’l 5 lines poetry Month , Haiku Heights

Author: Pratibha

Poet , Story teller , dreamer and an avid reader. Self published authoer of "Fragments" http://www.amazon.com/Fragments-ebook/dp/B00ASNQUC6/

14 thoughts on “Sweet poison”

  1. Thought provoking—like if you know someone who forgets your name and substitutes it with a sweet salutation.
    Very good and as always, inspirational

    Jaye

  2. Intriguing inspection of those times when words are meant to hide the entire truth. I like the direct kind of folk, the ones who beat you in the face with the truth. But even that is lethal, even with thick skin.

    Nice.
    D

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