“we” lost

Candles two,
one for me
one for you;
Songs i sing
any word that
memories bring;
flowers i buy
of your choice,
two seats i take
the movie hall
I sit in your wait.
The day ends
I lost love –
you lost me –
A lost day,
two lost souls –
Now remain
just memories !

Written for Poetry Rally Week 32

Author: Pratibha

Poet , Story teller , dreamer and an avid reader. Self published authoer of "Fragments" http://www.amazon.com/Fragments-ebook/dp/B00ASNQUC6/

26 thoughts on ““we” lost”

  1. I really liked that!
    I like ‘sit in your wait’ – cute.
    if it was my poem, I would be tempted to leave out the exclamation mark at the end, just put a fullstop or …

  2. Good rhymes, a familiar topic but handled freshly and not overtly predictable. I think you create the living ghost of an absent presence well with your short, clipped but incisive list of images.

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