Beach i dream of

These days I often dream
dream of the deserted beach,
beach in colors red and blue
blue not of the cloudy sky
sky that reach to touch the sea
sea of colors green and gold
golden like the sunset we await
await night to break the spell
spell of this love filled beach
beach that i dream of often now.

Prompted @ Poetry Potluck , Submitted also to One Shot Wednesday


This week for One Shot i attempted a loop poetry where the last word of a line becomes the first word of next line too.

21 thoughts on “Beach i dream of

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  2. nice…i like the way the lines link…and of course the touches of color add much….a beach of love, who would not long…nice one shot!

  3. someone did something to the post, we are trying to fix the potluck for week 5..
    thanks for the support and patience.
    Happy Thursday!

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