knowing love(r)

To love me, if you thought,
be sure you love me loads.
if you wanna love me loads,
the real me, i will never show.

Its not that i have an ugly soul
nor do i fear any secret being known.
But i have a complex mind of my own
to which my heart will listen not.

It ain’t pretty to get involved
listening well but still being told
by your lover to be left alone
which i can do,make this note.

the one who knows me not
stands the chance to love most
its not true,but a self crafted plot
to test if am just loved or even known.

 

Written for Poets Rally#30 as a monorhyme.

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Author: Pratibha

Poet , Story teller , dreamer and an avid reader. Self published authoer of "Fragments" http://www.amazon.com/Fragments-ebook/dp/B00ASNQUC6/

47 thoughts on “knowing love(r)”

  1. Beautiful plot.. and I hope you get loved even though.. Although I believe in the love being absolute not requiring any reciprocation at all.. but the way you have developed this one, requires one to be on their own and without anything in return…and that I think is pure love if you find some one doing that… nice verse…
    Thanks

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  2. Excellent poem. I love it…and the mind that made it must beautiful indeed.

    Thanks for this poem.

  3. Its perfectly fine to be fickle you’re a woman!LOL! But it does seem that you do try to make it hard for your guys…Just try to keep in mind that we are simpler and may not understand your ways without spelling it out one letter at a time… slowly. I love the wit of your word and the flow of your poem and I hope that you don’t mind that I’m having fun (at your expense of course). Have a great day!LOL!

  4. …the one who knows me not
    stands the chance to love most
    its not true,but a self crafted plot
    to test if am just loved or even known…

    …like those lines.

  5. I really love the last line…I think we all have self plots when it comes to love – this is a great piece thanks for sharing!

  6. No wonder you have been missing from The Blogosphere.. Hope it was good one- hunh?
    I am so glad you liked it- I have been missing you like crazy- glad I could cheer you up.. Loads of Love Deary xoxox

    – WELCOME BACK SWEETHEART –

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