Hold me tight,
Etch with your fingers
A verse of our love,
Real like the passionate kisses,
Tall like the moments without it.
… and I promise to read them
back to your skin,
as eagerly as
you would,
Illuminated
by the spark in
your eyes,a fire that
consumes me,every time
you even whisper my name.
–
Just a gorgeous verse of love filled with warmth.
This is beautiful!
I think you have a wondrful talent for poetry…were I younger and trying to find a soulmate, I would steal this and read it to her in the moon light…of course I would give you the credit…the next morning.
Very romantic and a soothing image. Nicely done.
Nimue, so nice to read you again. Romantic, luscious, and the illumination coming from the eye of the beloved… just gave me the warm fuzzies, especially because Lex and I renewed our marriage vows last night. Love, Amy
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thanks Amy !!
this comes the night after me and my guy made a few vows for our life ahead , whenever and however we start one together
Beautiful !
Nice and warm… You write so well!!
This poem is certainly lit up with love, sensuous and mouthwatering..
Romantically supercharged; brava…
Oh, love!! It is glorious and you’ve captured the emotions so well!
Very romantic mood here!
Well penned.
Made me go all gooey! Delightful.
very romantic, beautifully written!