This is it, then ?
I guess.
The last hug , the last kiss, the last touch.
I would like one more hug, if you don’t mind.
I didn’t mind the sex. A hug wont cost much,I guess.
(pause)
See you next weekend.
and peel some more wounds ?
Last time ?
Sure.
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This is for G-Man’s Fridayflash 55
Also linked to Inspiration Monday
hmmm I would not mind that either …
what ? one more night together with the person you gotta leave !
sigh ! no one would refuse i guess
sometimes those weeks can seem so long without them…made me think of when i worked out of town and gone monday thru friday….was hard….the peeling of wounds adds a lot of emotion to this…
interesting interpretation !
I like that you gave new light to the story
Not exactly a healthy relationship. It’s the sort of thing that makes me glad to be long past my miss-spent youth, though it only took me a couple of relationships to learn to not cling.
sometimes unhealthy is what keeps you living ..
Sounds ultimately unsatisfying. There’s a ring of truth in this 55.
you got it right on !
Ah, yes.
Breaking up IS hard to do.
And nobody is good at it.
Cheers!
JzB
I wish it was not this awkward and tough …
There is a sad undertone to the poem…a feeling that true love is missing in the relationship.
you never know !
It might be there but not the togetherness …
Lady Nimue…
Some things are just too hard to give up completely.
Like you for example…:-)
Loved your 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
heheh ! thanks for the compliment
Good to see you here every week !
This is very sadly realistic. Nicely done.
thanks for the visit and the words
Why does some love feel more like pulling off a bandaid? You know you should just rip free and be done, but you can’t.
Ooo, that “peel some more wounds” line really brings it together. Like sometimes it hurts too much to heel.
A lot going on between the lines. Nice.
How a relationship ends is often the best way to gauge how healthy it was. Well done!