And it finally hit her,
The drop of rain..
Like nectar from above,
It filled her with love;
It travelled down her eyes
And rested on the neck
Like loops in her ears
singing for the gem;
And it finally hit her,
One drop after another
Till she was lost in them…
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Submitted to Open Link night @dverse Poetics/
Engaging images!
Brought back images of youth and walking in the summer rain.
This is BEAUTIFUL!
I could actually imagine the scene. <3
Also, not trying to act smart or anything, but isn't that nectar?
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yes it should be ! thanks for pointign out .. And glad you liked this
Glorious rain! How I would love to be under such a downpour right now.
nice…i like that you set the scene but allow us to fill in the emotion…is it her tears or really rain…and to me either can be cleansing
I know you have your very dry season and very wet and here it is wet alot so you have given me a new take on rain. Beautiful!