her smile gives away
the hopes she hides in eyes
his sun shine gone pale ..
He empties his heart in words and sets them free in winds ; knowing well she stands on the roof top catching every sheet of paper that flies from his room. Each night she builds new hopes from them.
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Written for Haiku Height (hope)
Also linked to G-Man’s friday flash 55
this is beautiful…i love the scene of him emptying it out and her on the roof catching to build hopes…could def see a piece of art, a painting or a vid done to that…
Lady Nimue…
You are always so positive snd full of hope.
You are s treasure to us all.
Loved your 55 My Friend
Thanks for playing , and have a Kick Ass Week End
Hmmm, this is filled with mystery. Is he torturing her? Too scared to speak up? Is she deluding herself? Intriguing.
What a perfect poem to end my day with…lovely!
so true…happens at times with many…intense…thoughtful…loved the take…awesome…
Love you for writing this.
What a beautiful rendition
Yeah, I like the feeling of hope portrayed here.
Lovely…
I enjoyed your haiku. My favorite line is the second “the hopes she hides in eyes”. How many times have I tried to hide my hopes – just in case.
Well done.
Pale sunshine is usually always a dangerous sign…
Tell Me, Sister Crow
Lovely!