The call that came,but late

It all started with this post by poohi.

that lead to a poem by Martin & poohi’s reply to the poem as detailed here.

And then i joined with these lines :

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The call that never came,
did happen one fine day;
alas, it was a bit too late,

neither happy nor sad,

for the words exchanged,

the pain was too heavy

to carry its own weight,

the complaints too many

to be silenced by excuses of fate;

the eyes too parched

to cry and let things be fine,

the distances too large

to make you my sunshine;

The call that never came,

should never have changed,

neither happy nor sad,

yet disappointed by the same

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Poohi replied to these these lines and that too is added to the above linked post.

Any more inspired thoughts or ideas ?

Do tell me about “a call” that came or not, on time or not !

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Brian wrote another poem on “the call” .. I hope I could say this myself ..

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