If there is one thing,
that consumes
like nothing else,
I will whisper your name;
the desires all gone
and hopes all dead,
ashes though I carry yet.
no one matters,nor I try
to push the waves away,
I surrender,I drown
If there is one thing,
that consumes
like nothing else,
I will whisper your name;
the desires all gone
and hopes all dead,
ashes though I carry yet.
no one matters,nor I try
to push the waves away,
I surrender,I drown
hmmm push swim hard take a deep breadth and get out
The poem gave me the feeling of great loss…very powerful.
Powerful response, Lady Nimue. Good luck with the Months of the Year challenge. I’m not sure if I will be able to join this year as my novel is on the brink of being published and “consuming” my time. :0)
This is a belly-hitting, poignant….
…. love is worth even those hard lessons we learn, loved it