Its a wonder how I travel
miles within seconds,
staring at that solo pic
of you, midst snow,
smiling at me i suppose
(did you know it then,
you would leave this for me)
to fill in the hollow surroundings
with shadows of my life
always in a shallow battle
to let go of you this last time
end my misery,but i do not,
i can not, i will not maybe…
The other day I was looking at old pics and my eyes fell on ‘HIS’ pics and I felt the same what you just expressed.
Somehow you always express what I feel and that is why I love your writings sooo much…..
Loved this piece….Made me nostalgic…Sigh
We cling so much, don’t we? Great words.
This is somehow very sad. Especially on a gloomy winter night.
The phrase “shadows of my life..” really engender an interesting tone to the poem…which I enjoyed very much.
Awesome poem. Even love abandons it is hard to let it go. Too bad they don’t realize the love, they are the ones that lost it.
Wonderful, I really enjoyed this piece. You used the words to great effect.
visions of past taunting and haunting
very haunting
this is a poem for sitting in a canoe and
just thinking on your ex. you took me there.
I know what you mean! Excellent write!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/11/mostly-about-the-past/
dynamic imagery!
Awesome poem, thanks for sharing.
heartbreaking, yet we do this to ourselves, hold on to things that are bittersweet!!! lovely piece my dear, hugzzzz
So nostalgic. It makes me want to know the backstory.
great word tour.
Glad to see you share.
I want to see what you imagined.. Pass me your glasses