Lets put to vote,
to say or not,
what wrong goes
creating my woes..
Lets seek a council
i be the pupil
and you my guide
lets begin the ride..
Hands follow trail
of desires so frail
yet lips know to seal
as passion heals..
you and me
not meant to be
yet some how we are
so near, so far …
Prompted @ Magpie Tales (image) , Sunday Scribblings , OSI
The short lines and straightforwardness of the thought suit each other well. Excellent take on the prompt.
Glides very well! enjoyed the ride,thanks.
“yet lips know to seal”, i love that line…
have a great week ahead..
JJRod’z
so near and so far gives a sad bent to this…i do like the submission in it to the teaching….perhaps if more of us did that
Exciting and sad at once. Whatever are we to do?
The last line sums it up perfectly.
I like the way that trips along, especially the last few lines. Nicely lighthearted!
bitter-sweet…
So much to take in and ponder….brilliant and beautiful!!
I love the image and there is a beautiful tug between the two lovers in this poem.
nicely crafted catalogue of life-decisions
Love the push/pull of this piece!
Ah, the uncertainty of love and commitment and a good expression of our young foolishness. Lucky we are not like that now…or are we?
Pretty well sums up a relationship. Well done.
Yes or no? When put to the vote I think the lips have it!.
Guess some things aren’t meant to be, more’s the pity…
short and to the point