blinded by your hate
i kept loving your shadows
till pain took my life
winds of faith in you
pushed me into darkness
where dreams bled to death
senses came alive
on threshold of extinct hope
and life surged in me
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Prompted @ Haiku Heights , OSI , Writer’s Island
Submitted to Poetry Potluck
Very nice.
Excellent! Terrific meaning inherent in it. Well done.
and now that Life is sruged in you.. Get out and enjoy the LIFEEEEEEEEEEE
fantastic trio! very touching and painful.
stunning.
powerful expressions.
Thanks for sharing.
Nimue:
deep…troubling—realistic
Jaye
Thought provoking. Thank you for sharing.
Siggi in Downeast Maine
I hope those were good thoughts
Oh my, those are some heavy words.
Thought-provoking words indeed.
Embrace and enjoy life while you can!
I love this so much. From pain to hope
Very powerful and emotionally appealing…..beautiful choice of expression…
lovely write pouring out your heart to the one you love
lovely words…very thought provoking…
Beautiful…
wow haiku clouds! stratus, altrostratus, cirrus? happy to see fair weather in end
Beautiful, challenging and never say die. We owe none a living! How true!
First visit to your blog – loved your poems.
These are incredible haikus deep and intense fabulous
beautifully done
WOOOOWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!
so powerful! I am jealous, i can’t utter a single verse in haiku!
A dark haiku….sad, powerful, great write lady!
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Thank God, the last one felt very soothing.. ! Enjoyed ..