Miss (Long for) June 13, 2011 by ladynimue To miss once is fine, twice or thrice too for mankind; more ? Its being a slave == Prompted @ OSI , Haiku heights About these ads Spread the word:Like this:Like Loading...
My fine target would be three then! I like this, Lady N. It did make me wonder what I’d miss? .. To miss once is fine, twice or thrice too for mankind; more ? Its being a slave Reply
we get to that one person and then love can becomes a chain around us.. simple and beautiful haiku Reply
wow, strong sentiment here. Maybe my tolerance level is way high, but I hope I’ll still be part of normal mankind to miss more than thrice Reply
A slave? yes, and no? Short and worth thinking about Nimue! But I’d rather be a slave in the name of love! Missing and loving go together dear! Reply
that is how it is, my dear….and what it is! we find it so very difficult to get out of the whirlpool of emotional attachments. nice one! Reply
ladynimue this is so true it is almost scary, it has been a long time since I read a short poem Haiku or otherwise that just slaps you in the face with reality this is fabulous! Reply
So true… and that makes you feel over protected! LIVE FREE!
well done ~
My fine target would be three then!
I like this, Lady N. It did make me wonder what I’d miss?
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To miss once is fine,
twice or thrice too for mankind;
more ? Its being a slave
You are much blessed if you do not have anything to miss
we get to that one person and then love can becomes a chain around us.. simple and beautiful haiku
I love this fabulous job =)
wow, strong sentiment here. Maybe my tolerance level is way high, but I hope I’ll still be part of normal mankind to miss more than thrice
A slave? yes, and no? Short and worth thinking about Nimue!
But I’d rather be a slave in the name of love! Missing and loving go together dear!
Well then get up go out and get whatever one is missing….
Or maybe we dont deserve it
Nimue:
I iwish there was more…I am not a poet–just a fan
Jaye
Spot on. excellent.
http://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/06/dream-seed.html
Good point well poemed. Thanks!
cool,
well done.
that is how it is, my dear….and what it is! we find it so very difficult to get out of the whirlpool of emotional attachments. nice one!
So very clever.
Love it…I can relate
a slave to mistakes. lovely.
ladynimue this is so true it is almost scary, it has been a long time since I read a short poem Haiku or otherwise that just slaps you in the face with reality this is fabulous!