Why ask for a heart
heart that is black
black like the hate
that your love lacks.
Why not you forget
forget who you were
were you not like that
could be better or worse.
why not you forgive
forgive those who hurt
hurt and taught you well
never to throw your love.
~
Written for One Shot Wednesday
Ninue: The first four lines could stand alone.
This is the subject matter I crave. The black heart—why are they so darn attractive?
Jaye
I never could find an answerto that Jaye .. why we love reading / writing of darkness .. also at times to walk in there !
a very nice approach @ cool.
No why forgive .. This is why they go and di the same to someone else no never forgive I dont.
You are too much full of hate ! I think the person deserves it .. but what you do not deserve is the thought of it even ! Have blessed smiles !
I love the way this flows!
Sometimes forgiveness is difficult and you show the emotions so well in describing it here. Well done!
Smooth flow, nice word plays
Beautiful
loved it 
Was having a writers block so missed reading u
btw i wrote something in hindi…do read and tell how was it
loved your post dear !
thanks for the heads up
if you cant forgive you should forget.
this is a very deep question, so no casual answers for this.
sometimes people cant forgive because their tormentors are still present in their life and keep poking their fingers in the wound, so it never heals. sometimes its impossible to move away from them because they wont let you……
so if one cant forgive one should wipe it out of his/her heart/mind, after all he too is entitled for some happiness and peace in the world.
love the form, the way the lines wrap, sometimes it can be hard to let go of such intense feelings…
i thought the form gives more stress on the feelings !
Smooth flow!
There was a reflection of Loop form poetry in this that really made a great composition. Nice write ~ Rose
yes.. i forgot about looping in last lines !
Velvet =)