Here i am-
on border
of screaming
S.I.L.E.N.T.L.Y
from the pain
not of my leg
but from your voice
echoing in my head,
scolding out of care;
but you aren’t here!
.
.
.
Written for OSI & Monkey Man’s 160 character challenge.
Here i am-
on border
of screaming
S.I.L.E.N.T.L.Y
from the pain
not of my leg
but from your voice
echoing in my head,
scolding out of care;
but you aren’t here!
.
.
.
Written for OSI & Monkey Man’s 160 character challenge.
I see inspiration in this piece. It does remind me of something. As do all your work.
Great job in such a small framework. True talent—
jaye
And that’s the best compliment to any writing
Thanks !
Excellent!
Well crafted poem.
Lovely poem.
Sometimes the feelings are difficult to express but I can feel them here in a way
that connects. Well written. Thanks!
Such deep emotion in this. Excellent.
a good reason to scream.
well done.
A++
silently though .. mind it
Very powerfully emotional Sunday 160. Thanks for playing.
thanks for this fun challenge !!
Screaming silently is indeed very intensely done.. what a feel here.. I loved the way you expressed..
Powerful poem of emotion and pain. This poem comes from a deep place. Nicely written.
Stark and saddening.
Here is Mine:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/05/02/the-other-side/
@Mama Zen , Charlie , Meiro : thanks for the read and comment !
Some abuses just stay with us. Well written and well illustrated, Numue.