You love your eggs half-cooked and you never ceased to remind me of that fact. Every breakfast of mine including eggs will ensure we have this very conversation ending when I would invite you for breakfast at my place and promise to make it according to your taste. Though you never came, I do practice making half-cooked eggs – perfect enough for me to nibble the corners and leave the rest for you to finish out of my hands.
shadows resonate
the tears one try to suppress;
silence showers pain.
Finally i managed to write a haibun as prompted by Victoria here. Ideas for the post from Magpie Tales [image] , Haiku heights , Sensational Haiku Wednesday
Wow I love the nostalgia in this one
And lovely haiku…I did the same picture prompt but with a mush theme
btw when u free a bit do read my long bday post
very nicely written – sorry the diner doesn’t appreciate your considerable efforts
Deep emotions in those few lines of verse.
Wow, eggs seasoned with a pinch of sadness. This is a wonderful haibun. Thanks for joining, Nimue!
goes deep
I like the narrative and haiku perspectives complementing each other, creating perspectives of the hurt within!
powerful image …
wow so sad I can feel the emotion!
That was really a touching to share with us! … one of those things you better say nothing and leave the feelings to flow free …
Deep in thought. Sometimes, it helps me to let the first tear fall slowly releasing the pain. Takes time, a process, and a journey. Find, myself, that sharing feelings, especially with others, helps heal the hurt. Each word heard and struck a chord. Thank you for evoking inner feelings. Thoughtfilled post!
Sad but beautiful – especially the haiku.
Anna
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very deep.
great haibun
Great nostalgic feel to this piece. deep thoughts for few words.
Who knew eggs could produce such feelings?
Good piece, like the intimate feel of it.
Silence showers pain… powerful! Sorry I’m late visiting – it’s been a crazy week.
sad, bless you.