All those years
all i wished most
all the time, was
to be like you
to not feel you
to be another you
not realizing
not understanding
not thinking about
the price on its head
the pain that change gets
the void that now remains
am not me anymore,will never be
am not bothered,but miss it much
am broken not but encaged by own thoughts.
Written for Luna’s Poetry Challenge
And now the poem in spotlight today. I first read this poem here and am glad i remembered it to share with you :
Phenomenal Woman
Pretty women wonder where my secret lies.
I’m not cute or built to suit a fashion model’s size
But when I start to tell them,
They think I’m telling lies.
I say,
It’s in the reach of my arms
The span of my hips,
The stride of my step,
The curl of my lips.
I’m a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That’s me.I walk into a room
Just as cool as you please,
And to a man,
The fellows stand or
Fall down on their knees.Further I bring for you, one of my favorite poetry since i first read it when i was in school – “The highwayman” . Loreena gives it a whole new haunting feel.
Absolutely loving the McKennitt video, favorite music, very inspirational! The poem from Maya Angelou I’ve read too, I guess on the same place as you! Your poem is very nice!
Yes Blaga , we read the poem at same blog
Am glad you loved the video !!
rich thoughts, well done…
be yourself..keep it up.
Thanks for the heads up Ji !!
What an intriguing poem…quite enjoyed reading it.
awesome! it’s a powerful and dark, yet hopeful poem. And your a mckennitt fan?
so cool! have you heard her new albulm; The wind that shakes the barley? awesome!
I checked the album after you told about it .. really awesome music ! Thanks !
Excellent job. Thanks for sharing. Sharing poems is something I truly enjoy doing. I enjoy reading your blog very much.
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am not me anymore…wow! This is sad, but hopefully the new me/us is better
I am a subscriber but this did not pop up, how come?
you still read it ! cool !! And i am not sure yet if the new me is better or not .. will let you know
Well done..
The Highwayman is one of the most beautiful poems I’ve read. The other which comes close is The Rime of the Ancient Mariner. But my favorite poems are by Wordsworth.
I love those poems too !!
Ahh, another McKennitt fan!!!
The Way I am — very powerfully expressed! If only we were taught early in life to appreciate our unique treasures and talents that are divinely instilled within us and no one else. It would have saved so many wrong paths and false starts …
Yes Becca .. It would indeed have saved a lot of time and heart aches ..
I went ahead and posted results for week one a few hours early.
http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/poetry-month-clambake-lets-have-some-fun/
Luna