The only dream of a different world i ever had, was to live with the one i loved [ or so i thought] And so the “new world” always brings these feelings to surface.
It was a silly dream i know
living together forever
love would never have grown
It was a silly dream i know
Seeds of new world i did sow
now weeds it though gather
It was a silly dream i know
living together forever.
living together with you
It was a silly dream i know
not even a weed to hold to
living together with you
some facts are as untrue
as the challenges they throw
living together with you
It was a silly dream i know
Seeds of new world i did sow
though no hope i ever had
love would never have grown
Seeds of new world i did sow
It was a silly dream i know
i wish it was better dead
Seeds of new world i did sow
though no hope i ever had.
Prompted @ Theme Thursday , March challenge
Nice one
In the dark recesses of my mind … underneath alot of “stuff” … your new world and mine are similar …
Thank you for your contributions this month – it is always a pleasure to visit your “nook” … onward!!
Ah ! I hope you find your world prety soon Becca
Very though provoking!
Interesting take on the “silly” theme — really melancholy.
Oh ya , even I was surprised that silly led em to this write
The Triolets were well bred!!
BRAVO!!!
Hauntingly silly..
Silly dream indeed
Hugs x
And such silly dreams are the ones that hurt most !
I like the repetitive style of the triolet for this poem, Nimue. It’s almost haunting and can kind of get under your skin.
I understand what you mean ..
Infact It was kind of inspired by your cyclic poem idea !
Broken hearts heal slowly, but they heal. My heart goes out to anyone suffering the loss of someone whose life was knit with the one that left. It’s a severe wound, but it can heal. Shed those tears bountifully. Tears are part of healing. Blessings to you…
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A somewhat sad albeit provocative ‘silly’/'whimsical’… very pretty. I did think the font and text color added to the whimsy.
oh yeah .. the color scheme definitely was for that
How sad. I don’t think living together is a silly dream. Very very sad….
it is silly if the other person has different ideas and you know of them too !
perfect job…
cheer up…