Some days
just some
I let go of
I think so
My regrets
In a moment
So many
I could forget
I think so
Those days
I think of
not just you
where I parted
of days gone
spent so alone
It happens
Always to me
Let it unfold
Soon I pray
As it will be.
Written collaboration with Leo (the lines in blue)
An undercurrent of sadness in these lines..well crafted.
Very cool, just like early japanese poetry writing, two poets creating a wonderful story from the air!
thanks !! glad you liked the effort
i love poetry “duets” ~ very poignant.
Clever collaboration. Never tried anything like that Hmmmmm.
Awesome
…u both r just the greatest poets i know 
you say more than we deserve
Thanks swt hrt !
Wow.. duet in poetry.. Hmmm.. so creative..
Beautifully powerful….
the painting and the poem both are splendid LN- just splendid.
i really loved the image myself .. kinda haunting
Awesome wordings , Allot of them can relate to this , as can I. well done both of ya