Strange are mind’s ways
try as much, we never get a say
In mysterious manner it strays
leading words into its play.
Stranger does our words flow
a silent pact they do uphold
to spread the tales of any show
that life stages, but we ignore.
Written for One shot Wednesday
Inspired from the comments at NU’s post between him and me.
Thought provoking…especially the lines:
“to spread the tales of any show
that life stages, but we ignore.”
Very nice poem.
I could not agree more about the straying of mind part. Mind and words have indeed a profound connection.
Ah, who really understands the process. Nicely done.
Loved your inspirations,
to spread the tales of any show
that life stages, but we ignore.
This part was very good!
nice thought provoking one shot…yeah sometimes it just takes us places we never thoguth we would go…
Nice vigorous tussle in the mind with words, to achieve something I suppose, and we know not the reason why!!
Appreciate the recognition you lead up to in your final lines that our words will go or take us places unexpectedly, yet we do not always recognize this, or even allow for it.
Like what it did to my thoughts…
an ordinary moment
love the lyrical play with the minds and the words that filter through it…bkm
LadyNimue….
Your ‘flow’ is always perfect and powerful.
loved your One Shot!
If we spoke aloud every thought that bounced into our brains they would have to institutionalize us!!!
Interesting way to depict minds chaos… I liked it very much. Your words are vivid and true.
Thanks for sharing.
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Very nicely and aptly said, Nimue.. our minds work in the strangest of ways indeed!!!
Really liked this one a lot!! My mind has gone skinny dipping in the pool.. I hope it comes back alright.. (sigh)
I am with you dearie .. whenever my mind comes out of the idea pool, i fear i lost more than i gained !
But thats the real game isn it
“to spread the tales of any show
that life stages, but we ignore.”
i adore the way you write! ♥
Good description, relating our mind, thoughts, words and actual facts.