spicy aromas,talks
memories bouncing on steps
door to home;heaven
knock on your soul daily
invoke a conversation
temple of your joy
unlock the memories
dust the sad ones out of door
sanctum in my heart
Written for Haiku challenge – 28 days 28 haiku , Poetry Potluck
nice…..
Knocking on heaven’s door
very beautiful Last part was on the spot
well done
your words are deep and touching..
best wishes.
A++
thoughtful, delightful haikus…
One feels good after reading this poem.
I quickly connected with…
“spicy aromas,talks
memories bouncing on steps
door to home;heaven”
The haiku were wonderful, well done.
“knock on your soul daily, invoke a conversation”… “unlock the memories, dust the sad ones out the door….”,
1.keep the doors of communication open 2.get rid of the memories that hold you back, 3.open your heart again. 4.beautiful poem without my interpretation.
A feel good poem!
This is delightful … thank you for sharing! And congrats on your Poet’s Award as well! Delighted to share with you ~~ Becca
‘Memories bouncing on the steps’ reminds me of how my children used to bounce on their butts, going down one step at a time, when they were babies.
‘dust the sad ones out of door’
and what is left is heavenly like your poem
Beautiful series of haikus. I like the idea of choosing which memories to keep.
awesome memory!!!!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/02/22/h-ku-22-staircase-to-heaven/
you did great..my potluck’s here: http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/04/metamorphosis/
Lovely set of Haiku’s and cant say which is the better one!! Excellently done Nimue!!
very beautiful imagery created with wonderful use of words
the second one is more spiritual though!
this is a gorgeous combination of both themes nimue. simply splendid combination.
trisha
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I have to agree with all previous comments! Delightful and heavenly nice! Good Potluck!
This is super phenomenal! I love all three.
“sanctum in my heart” I liked that, thanks
These were wonderful haikus! I don’t really write haikus (not very good at them) but I like what you’ve done here. The first one, makes me think – the power of smell is a really strong trigger. I’m glad it evoked good memories for you!
Sounds good to me
awesome Nimue, all the Haiku conveys a lot..
Someone is Special
Simply lovely, LadyNimue.