Keep safe my memory
uncalled and untouched,
promise to forget.
Prompted @ Sunday Scribblings (safe)
Submitted to Haiku Challenge – 28 days , 28 haiku
and also to Haiku Heights
Keep safe my memory
uncalled and untouched,
promise to forget.
Prompted @ Sunday Scribblings (safe)
Submitted to Haiku Challenge – 28 days , 28 haiku
and also to Haiku Heights
wonderful lines Nimue, it is my pleasure to have you here.. Welcome to the Challenge and Have a great day!
Have Fun!
Someone is Special
Very sleek poem. I love it so much.
pleasure !!
Memories fades, We can’t forget them . how hard we try to forget it will always reckoning at us
thats why i wrote of not picking some of them at all …
Oh, lots to ponder here. So much in so few words!
i guess you got what i really meant
Isn’t this lovely. Haunting somehow. I’m going to enjoy reading your haiku this month!
pleasure is all mine !! enjoy the challenge
very beautiful.
i don’t understand it. why keep and then forget? is it something like money in the bank that you hope will keep on growing if it remains undisturbed for years? or is it like a tumor that you want ignored until it eventually kills the host body? or is it like a seed you want hidden under the snow in anticipation of spring?
I really like this…there is a depth to the words that makes them so poignant. Well done.
This recalled a story I just heard of a young man whose memory was wiped clean and the work he had to do to restore it. Something we take so much for granted. Poignant.
this was beautiful and painful. Your poems are so splendid.
Check mine in my haiku blog:
http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com
“uncalled and untouched” .. good lines!!
“Keep safe my memory” … the first line is a poem in itself. Lovely …
thanks for visiting me and i change my theme on your advice. do check it out if it is legible now.
Your haiku is so inspirational. abounds in silent wisdom.
Fade those harsh memories and blot them out, it will then make room for many more happier ones to fill up!!
it exactly fitted in both blogs, now i will have to check SIS’s prompt..
trisha
http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/02/20/free-soul-20th-feb-2011/
Nimue, this is thought provoking. Love it.
lol. My Haiku on eternity is similar but I ask to remember lol. lol, nice one as well!
I really enjoyed this! It has an understated power that really struck me.
So often how the mind works. Nice one.
we are not going to forget you.
trisha
http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/02/20/free-soul-20th-feb-2011/