she did
drink her tears
for you.
can you
drink her tears
for her ?
This is not a typical haiku. i used the 2-3-2 syllable count here ’cause the thought did not want expansion. hope it made sense.
Submitted to Haiku challenge – 28 days 28 haiku
she did
drink her tears
for you.
can you
drink her tears
for her ?
This is not a typical haiku. i used the 2-3-2 syllable count here ’cause the thought did not want expansion. hope it made sense.
Submitted to Haiku challenge – 28 days 28 haiku
Great question to contemplate upon!! …and challenging too!! Nice take on the prompt!!
It did make sense. I got it, it’s great!
Thanks ! am glad it did
what a shame if you cant!!!!
Bless your sweet heart for writing it.
trisha
http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/16/tender-embrace
This is super-fabulous ladynimue…
Very well asked…
What an interesting turn of a phrase…loved it.
lovely wonders.
Hope the answer is “yes.” Wonderful way to pose the issue … Good job.
I loved it Nimue..
Someone is Special