Every night,the same dream
flowers i set,you bring some wine
i wake up to ashes
Submitted to Haiku Challenge – 28 days 28 haiku
Every night,the same dream
flowers i set,you bring some wine
i wake up to ashes
Submitted to Haiku Challenge – 28 days 28 haiku
What a beautiful, horrible haiku. Words experienced vicariously, and felt deeply.
So very sad! Out of the ashes, though, new life grows.
Shalom,
http://cloakedmonk.com/2011/02/10/hiding/
aww..touching! dreams can actually hurt a lot sometimes but yet we never stop having them..coz they provide a meaning to life..lovely
enjoy the dream while it lasts
brilliant haiku!
http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/02/longing-for-you.html
sweet dreams tonight.
thanks for the wish
The longing for true love capture well in these lines.
Ah, heartbreaking! Beautiful haiku.
the last line is very stirring this is almost a love story in just three lines!
time makes us over come our past, Things will move on as you walk along.
Brilliant. It was like a thunderstrike.
touching Haiku Nimue…
Someone is Special
That’ isvery affecting…maximum meaning in minimal words…