My eyes see February 6, 2011 by ladynimue my own eyes deceive they see not what “I” want to; but want to see you. Submitted to Haiku Challenge – 28 days 28 haiku About these ads Spread the word:Like this:Like Loading...
what a profound desire… brilliant haiku! http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/02/in-hindsight.html Reply
Sometimes heart acts like that, doesnot it? loved it. mine is here: http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/04/those-eyes/ Reply
touching and tangible too…It has happened with us all at one point of time or other…felt ur haiku Reply
Gr8 thoughts .. Very expressive .. Have a look on mine .. http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/02/06/eyes-day-6-of-haiku/ Reply
very beautiful.. loved those last two lines… so true
very beautiful.. loved those last two lines… so true
what a profound desire… brilliant haiku!
http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/02/in-hindsight.html
Sometimes heart acts like that, doesnot it? loved it.
mine is here:
http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/04/those-eyes/
touching and tangible too…It has happened with us all at one point of time or other…felt ur haiku
Gr8 thoughts .. Very expressive ..
Have a look on mine ..
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/02/06/eyes-day-6-of-haiku/
nice message Nimue.. Loved it..
Someone is Special
dear and divine…. fine Haiku..
but want to see you as I…..
love all…
Sigh …..
You have perfectly described the lover’s dilemma. Lovely.
see you soon, hopefully,
what a smart word play .
Yes, we do see what we’re looking for. Nice.
complex yet nice
this can be true for many in my mind this is quite powerful.
Somewhere I thought it was creepy. Haha!