You & Me : what's not
You to me;
I to you
nothing
like priority.
You seek me
I seek you
though,more
than the need.
You want me
I want you
two poles of
magnetic feild.
You understand me
I understand you
like two people
so lonely.
You pamper me
I pamper you
dreamy shadows
of reality.
You wish for me
I wish for you
some one else to
care and forever be.
You know of me
I know of you
time will bring
in distances.
I will though
remember You
the way You will
want Me to,
in memories.
Prompted @ One shoot Photography Sunday
Also Submitted to One Shot wednesday
time pours always over , a cascade of memories… And with the time we all shall move … very well composed
I know you know this is beautiful Poem
“You understand me
I understand you
like two people
so lonely.” Awesome
you picked the best lines !!
Really like the way you responded to the prompt…a fine poem.
This is absolutely beautiful
As my Mom once said,”Ain’t Love Grand?”
oh lovely romantic…may time bridge that distance bringing heartbeats together…nice one shot.
Gorgeous!
This is so beautiful and it makes me want so bad to have someone by my side to share life and shenanigans. =)
Cheers. =*
I wrote three different poems for that picture and wasnt happy
now I know why – you caught that spirit in the picture and conveyed it in beautiful words I feel the longing and ache it isnt just gooey romance
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This is lovely!
Really cool how the lines seem to be almost mirror images like the standing face-to-face in the photo. I like the lines iBeingMe quotes above. Fine poem with great caring sentiments.
Beautifully done….
this is wonderful stuff..
a really good poem….
Nice!
I like the look of this poem and they symmetry of words.
In certain relationships, this is the best way to proceed.. I like this poem a lot, Nimue.. I think I can even relate to this one… (sigh)
A superb one shot!! Loved the form too… very cool and steady…
I enjoyed reading this self exploration and knowing each other… your lines…
‘You understand me
I understand you
like two people
so lonely.’
… were perfect… Thanks for sharing…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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