A line from you,
the next from me,
a word you forget,
and expect me to fill in
The spoon hits the mug
in a rhythm you devise
a tune plays on my lips
you approve it with smiles
I fill in more sounds
you stare at me shocked
suddenly fingers drum
nothing holding the flow.
A collective sigh escapes
our collaborative songs
linger somewhere
in the dream we wove.
Prompted @ Magpie Tales
Submitted to Poetry Rally Week 37
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what a beautiful piece…
I hear music in your words…
well done…
See you on Monday…
Awesome
Liked it too much…
Music is always so much more enjoyable when made together.
Synchronized minds, an orchestra of emotions. Two beings sub-merged in fluid chemistry.
Beautiful piece.
Yours sincerely,
Philharmonic poet.
Health and happiness to you and yours.
Happy rally, I liked it a lot.
Lu Ann.
lovely piece.. thank you for sharing. congrats on your perfect poet award wk 36.. here’s mine for this thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/
lovely one..music has no language and yet it can bind so many souls together..beautiful…
No less awesome than nearly all blog poetry!
Oh My! thats such a beautiful piece of poetry there
loved it completely
here from Jingle’s Rally.. You can find my poem at
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2011/01/12/i-dance/
Love your phrasing and the line “the spoon hits the mug in a rhythm you devise.” I can see this person here….thanks for sharing.
It reminds of the ‘Music and Lyrics’ movie… Nice one!
A lovely ‘tea for two’ feeling … music is better when shared.
Gr8 Thought …
Take a look on my work
A Poetry for the Nation ..
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/10/24/blood-and-sweat-form-patriotism/
!! Happy rally !!
Melodies made together are the best music.
Dearest Lady Nimue,
Thank you kindly for visiting my poetry blog! I am returning the favor by also visiting you here on your blog (for the purpose of strengthening the poetic/writing community as well!).
I really enjoyed the rhythm of your poem. You brought on a good point in that there is music ALL AROUND us if we keep on listening, including the most mundane things in our lives. Thank you for writing this piece.
Blessings to you,
Lotus
Aww.. how sweet is that!! Music can be born out of anything.. no? I think that’s the beauty of it…
Loved the dreamy nature of your poem, Nimue… A lovely take on the Magpie!!
duet of souls, splendid poem.
have a lovely weekend.
hmmm this rocked a lot. I dig, mucho mas!
Thank you!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
That hidden talent always leaves them with gaped mouths.
nicely said.
love it.. romantic and soulful this!
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This is a good write! This kind of partnership is fun.
simply outstanding..
like your way of expressing things..
http://loveamongotherthings.wordpress.com/
Congratulations..
It was so dreamy to read it.. absolutely musically magical..
Love xx
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oh, that was a song for beauty and dreams to come true. Brilliant!
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This beautiful I love the idea of making music together splendid =)