When words failed to educate,
with silence did i try to object;
When tears failed to communicate,
with smiles did i try to fill the recess;
Only a night from old to new,
I severed all my ties with you.
When you failed to change your path
with a sigh did i give another try
When you failed to make it last,
with a broken heart i did cry.
Tainted freedom was what you gave
instead of dreams of a love filled place
Prompted @ 3WW , Carry On Tuesday
Submitted to Months of the year challenge – March
Such a tone of sadness…but sometimes things just don’t workout even when you try…nice write on that fact of life.
Awesome
bit sad though !
i know ..
Very painful..
and you have done great in expressing the emotions…
Loved reading it
Nicely Written…. From high hopes to all hopes last…. it’s described very well and emotionally
Just awesome! A broken heart never repairs without the crack- it cant. It will live again but the old crack will stay even if reduced to a taint- as you said.
with a sigh did i give another try
When you failed to make it last,
with a broken heart i did cry…
well put, crying helps, stay strong, best wishes for the year to come.
Sigh! A sad poem but a well written one about an all too common experience. Well done.
Sad but very beautiful.
Poignant, gave me pause to ponder my past… Thank you
Cry with a open heart , the tears will fill up the spaces and heal the wounds.