did i ever tell
how good even chaos was
when you were with me
*
when you were with me
i invited chaos to my life
to keep you away
*
to keep you away
i acted mean and helpless
did i ever tell
*
did i ever tell
i treated love like a sin
when you were with me
*
when you were with me
i sinned in love and lust
to keep you away
*
to keep you away
happenned undesired
did i ever tell !
Dedicated to one of the best friend i had and whom i let go every other month,yet never really losing hope he might return.A haiku poetry to the one who hates haikus !
Submitted to Months of the year challenge – April (The month i met him few years back)
Did i ever tell
Keeping away is easier
Than keeping you near?
Very touching, hope he’ll return! Thanks for the visit! Happy holidays!
Rather like the way you’ve expressed these emotions…well said.
I can totally feel the way you felt while writing this poem, have been in the same situation.
And it would be repetitive, but still “i loved it”
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marvelous..
the haikus are superb..
and the use of some lines again and again makes it even more awesome…
“to keep you away
happenned undesired
did i ever tell !”
This one’s my fav…
I like your style. nice and touching!!
this is so very sad and beautiful.
Very Touching
stay confident,
love wins…
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Beautiful language and good will …
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Merry Christmas,
See you at potluck week 16 tomorrow…
We will have a break after week16, and come back on week 18…
Blessings!
Your support means a world to us..
xxx
I hope you don’t give up hope
wow…did i ever tell that you make me love poems again
very beautiful…
very honest and a joy to read…
Nicely done. I like the way it was presented. Good job.
Happy holidays to you and your family.
Thanks,
Cha
http://chaspalette.wordpress.com/2010/12/19/forgive-me/
Aww… I sense a deep sense of longing there…
Loved the style, Nimue…
Stay away, stay near… it doesn’t matter as long as the hearts speak to each other…
Happy New Year, lady!!
Beautiful.. very beautiful
You do have great Faith, Hope and Love in your heart!!….and that is the way you stay!!