Do not,dare you,
ever think of me
broken- not yet;
not unless i see you lose
in the maze you designed
and trapped me in;
not unless i know myself
how lonely is your end
or the pain you lived in
i sear i can not regret
neither will i pretend.
I hate to hate you
even when you leave
but this wasn’t my idea
you get what you bargained !
Written for Z to A challenge – E , Submitted to One Shot Wednesday
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love the maze that really inveigles both parties.
Nicely done One Shot
moonie smiles
Thoughts emerging from a woman scorned? Don’t mess with her, buddy.
Good one. Mine has a maze, too.
http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/12/01/one-shot-wednesday-monotone/
Love a strong woman who can’t be broken. Nicely done.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/11/30/two-souls/
A very powerful poem…
“You get what you bargained”… i love it
Powerful. Great interacting lines throughout. Last line is leveling. Nice One Shot!
“I hate to hate you”…lots of pain in that line…and to often true…powerful write…bkm
“i hate to hate you”..that line..that line “sighs” powerful! strong and yet i felt a hint of longing and vulnerability..despite the agony..AMAZING nimue!
Fierce, fierce, fierce!!
The strength of this poem resonates deeply in most of us…scorned or not~
Excellent expression of anger…and resolution to not be daunted.
Lady Nyo
oh how i love the fighting spirit in your poem!!
Thanks for sharing this. Deep emotion here.
Wow…so much anger.
Cheers!
strong, angry, bitter, get even…its all there…a wonderful dark share…cheers pete
I like the strength and determination in this poem
Not broken.. Lovely verse.. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing…
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Om Namah Shivaya
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