memory like silk thread
caress my face till in echo,
tears cut across it
Written for Z to A challenge – M , OSI (echo) , Haiku heights – Silk
and following is the song i listen to most when i travel down the memory lane :
Shared with Musical Monday
Very touching lines in the poem.
this was not as good as ur other posts
something here is missing..
there is not catch to continue…
hmmm .. maybe i should agree with you ,, but then it was a statement not something that would leave one wondering .. thank you for the honest opinion
This is an exquisite image/haiku.
very haunting, fabulous pick thanks for joining us at MM!
pleasure was all mine
i indeed liked it !
Such sorrow wonderfully expressed.
Mine are here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/11/13/echo/ and http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/11/13/silk/
beautiful haiku…you’ve woven the all of the memes so nicely. A wonderful prompt!
Sopt touch of sadness to the Haiku.
sad memories are written about more
atleast on this blog !
oh…poignant echoes…
Your words are beautiful… yet so haunting when coupled with the song. It cut me to the quick with memories of a man I loved who died in my arms… bittersweet, the memories.
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