She
no longer
tried to be special;
no pals,no talks,no love,just
tears.
This poetry of syllable pattern 1-3-5-7-1 is Oddquain. Learned from here
Submitted to Z to A challenge – O
She
no longer
tried to be special;
no pals,no talks,no love,just
tears.
This poetry of syllable pattern 1-3-5-7-1 is Oddquain. Learned from here
Submitted to Z to A challenge – O
SPECIAL. Good learning. Keep it up.
Wow…a lot of emotion in so few lines…well done.
Nicely done!
apt one.
lot of emotions in few lines but too sad
good that she found a reason to slash that part which is slashed
i stil didn’t understand the syllable
but a superb poem
4 lines.. lovely portrayal of feelings 
Oh I feel sad about her…:(