Tired of watching time steal friends and love,
I live like a pauper now,
in battle against time and increasing distances,
I realized i could win,
only by letting go of one and all i hold dear.
Submitted to One Shot Wednesday
Tired of watching time steal friends and love,
I live like a pauper now,
in battle against time and increasing distances,
I realized i could win,
only by letting go of one and all i hold dear.
Submitted to One Shot Wednesday
oh man…letting go of all…i cling too tight…tight write…nice one shot!
Courageous words.
Sad, misguided-notion work. Excellent.
Hold on to what is dear to you, only that will set you free Nimue..:) reaching out to you in a tight hug..:)
Wonderful…but scary prospect….well penned poem.
This is sad- so sad, yet inmensely beatiful and so full of LOVE -
Very true sentiment expressed here. Nice One Shot. Love and Light, Sender
This is so sad and yet profound. Fight that desire to cling onto loved ones and let them take flight like a beautiful bird.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/10/26/night/
powerful demonstration of struggles if letting go.
Letting go and not caring are two different things. My option is look forward. Tempus Fugit and life is precious. The adventure always lies on the path ahead. Take heart love goes with you. Great write nonetheless. Thanks, Gay @beachanny
nice
and the real truth of life
glad to see you here !!
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Powerful and very well written.
Great poem
Really a poignant verse and I relate with it so much… I write something like this too
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com.. love longing and loneliness against time… Lovely verse
Sad and true in many instances that letting go is the way overcome. Nice poem. Great image as well to complement your words.
letting go can be so difficult…powerful write and beautiful in its sadness
I can relate, since I lost my husband last year…
It is poignant.
sad…but powerfully said…and the image worked well too…cheers pete