These days I often dream
dream of the deserted beach,
beach in colors red and blue
blue not of the cloudy sky
sky that reach to touch the sea
sea of colors green and gold
golden like the sunset we await
await night to break the spell
spell of this love filled beach
beach that i dream of often now.
Prompted @ Poetry Potluck , Submitted also to One Shot Wednesday
This week for One Shot i attempted a loop poetry where the last word of a line becomes the first word of next line too.
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I enjoyed this poem. I am going to have to give this format a try!
Clever style in this. Nice one.
nice…i like the way the lines link…and of course the touches of color add much….a beach of love, who would not long…nice one shot!
like it a lot.. nice
Great use of color in the lines both literally and visually. thanks. Very nice One Shot!
What a colourful and beautiful poem. You added a special charm to the poem by using coloured fonts.
love the colorfulness in your poem,
beautiful imaginations…
u rock!
a delicious treat for us.
sweet you,
xx
I like this a lot. The form works so well.
A dreamy One Shot… well done!
Such an excellent dream to have…well said.
You’ve done an excellent job on the theme. Lovely poem!
someone did something to the post, we are trying to fix the potluck for week 5..
thanks for the support and patience.
Happy Thursday!
ohh .. thats sad .. hope its fixed soon
thought to read the enteries today ..
it is open now,
please visit and enjoy the poems.
Happy Thursday!
you are the dearest, L.
xxx
love the colours incorporated in your beach theme
Fun poem – good use of colors improves, makes the poem work.
I liked the use of color…and colors not usually associated with beaches! Intriguing poem!
Lovely loop poetry, the colors worked like a charm Nimue! Makes the beach picturesque!
Morning Mist – My Potluck
nice i liked this loop poetry style
will attempt 