She badly wanted to break away from the negative feelings inside her ! When all looked calm on surface, only she knew of the turmoil that plundered her heart every time she saw him. And that was daily ; she was married to him; to this fucking bastard who sold her to strangers last night ! She knew what was to be done; she sold herself again ; this time on highest price available; and kicked him out of the house. He showed the way, she will follow the same. She prepared to kill herself every night to make his living worse !
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This is very powerful. Nicely done.
Dark yet moving!
“She prepared to kill herself every night to make his living worse !” Superb!
awesome but too dark
why don’t you try collate these n make a novell. justsaying
dark and powerful stuff here.
This made me think…that is a very good thing. “Killing herself to make his life worse” but she will never know. That is very sad in itself!
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dang. tight with emotion and powerful…
This is just painful reality!
That bastard of a husband! He’d die a thousand times but won’t be enough to compensate for his grave sins toward her!
Wow! Pretty intense, I must say, especially when viewed from the perspective of “her”. But I would point out that for “him”, it would not be a big punishment except for the financial “losses”.
you never know what she might have in mind